I thought this was a good chorus, your thoughts? and i`m still trying to think of a storyline and title.


there can`t be lonely like this
there can`t be heartbreak that never mends
day has a night, hello has good-by
it comes to an end...
but here comes lonely again.



[other lines I thought of]

this constant falling apart
the guarantee from a broken heart

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